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Story of the completionist: Story of the completionist Chapter:2

by Starry Phantump

Starry Phantump They just love to argue but are as good at fighting as they are at arguing find out
Previously:Ty and Austin argued a bout Ty's lateness to work but something was eavesdropping on them what could it be

"Be quiet Ty"Austin said being vigilant,just then a monster as large as them "a beta"Ty yelled at the creature
(You see the shadow realm has its own ranking system at the bottom are the beta monsters next are the alpha's they are much larger and much more dangerous next is Omega this monster is the size of a skyscraper and very dangerous finally is the shadow rank these are beta sized monsters but terrifyingly strong)
" There must be more of them beta attack in groups"Ty said manifesting his weapon in his hands a sword and a shelf his ideal weapon while Austin someone's two jagged edged daggers
As the beta creatures jumped out of the forest group by group they began to attack the monsters "ggrrrr shadow creatures are never around here why today"Austin yelled slashing through the hordes causing them to be blown into dust which is what happens when the shadow creatures are killed" there's to many we have to clear them out all at once "Ty yelled "storm saber"
He shouted as his sword began to glow a light blue color sparks of electricity surrounded the sword "take this!!!" He swings his sword and a slash of lighting bursts out of it slicing the betas in half,as the smoke cleared no monsters were in sight of the attack *pant* *pant*
"We got em "Austin said in tired "wait,hordes of beta always have at least one alpha why didn't this one"Ty said questioning the attack, just then"RRRRRROOOOAAAARRR" filled the air as a large alpha ran up to them knocking down trees
"Ty!!!Why are you only smart when were about to die"Austin said being irritated by Ty
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  1. BlazinDelphox
    BlazinDelphox
    Please learn how to properly write or I could be your editor. I don't ask for anything except knowing that there is one less bad writer.
    May 17, 2017
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  2. BlazinDelphox
    BlazinDelphox
    Previously: Ty and Austin argued about Ty being late to work but something was eavesdropping on them.

    "Be quiet Ty!" Austin said being cautious, but just then a monster as large as them "A Beta!" Ty warned Austin.

    (You see the shadow realm has its own ranking system, at the bottom are the Beta monsters, next are the Alphas that much larger and much more dangerous, next the Omega, this monster is the size of a skyscraper and very dangerous and finally is the Shadow Rank, they are terrifyingly strong Betas)

    "There must be more of them, Betas attack in groups" Ty said manifesting his sword and shield, his ideal weapon, while Austin brings out two jagged edged daggers from his belt. As the Betas jumped out of the forest, group by group the fight began. "Shadow creatures are never around here, why today?" Austin yelled, stabbing rapidly leaving nothing but dust. "There's too many, we have to clear them out all at once!" Ty yelled "Storm Saber!" He shouted as his sword began to glow a light blue color sparks of electricity surrounded the sword "Take this!" He swings his sword and a slash of lighting bursts out of it slicing the Betas in half, when the smoke cleared no monsters were in sight. "We got em" Austin said, exhausted from the battle. "Wait, hordes of Betas always have at least one alpha, why didn't this one?" Ty said questioning the attack, just then a roar filled the air as a large alpha ran up to them knocking down any trees and plants in its way. "Ty! Why are you only smart when were about to die?" Austin yelled, furious at Ty.
    May 17, 2017
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  3. Starry Phantump
    Starry Phantump
    Thank you @UltimateChatotGamer :D
    Feel free to audition for characters on chapter 4 I'm sure you would like it btw it's at the end of the chapter not in the comment section:)
    Apr 15, 2017
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  4. UltimateChatotGamer
    UltimateChatotGamer
    LOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEE ITTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!
    Apr 15, 2017
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  5. Starry Phantump
    Starry Phantump
    Lol thanks:)
    Apr 13, 2017
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  6. Kragn
    Kragn
    "RRRRRROOOOAAAARRR", love it! xD
    Apr 13, 2017
  7. Starry Phantump
    Starry Phantump
    Here's the second chapter it's not as good the first to me but share your opinion with me
    And once again (I'll probably do this after every chapter)I would like to thank @Kragn and @UltimateChatotGamer for inspiring me to write this
    Apr 12, 2017
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