Pokemon palace: Poke palace! (Rough daft. Editing will be done later)

On a normal day...woke a normal kid. This kids name was Daren. Daren was never prepared for what was going to happen in the next few days and was not ready to experience what the new worlds was going to dump on to him..Daren lived in a average little house, with his average bed and his plain empty room that he never bothered to change...I mean COME ON Daren, get it together, throw a poster on the wall or something....jeez. Daren had always woken up when his abra started to scratch him to tell him he was hungry and that it was breakfast time. His abra was lazy and preferred to stay in the Great ball he was caught in. So Daren all ways was expecting a small cut on his face from out of abra's hunger every day. So Daren always had a bandage on his face. "JEEZ WHY DIDN'T I CATCH A COOLER POKEMON" He would yell in the mirror. Ohmae (the abra) did not give a crap about Daren's words, for they never seemed to affect him anyways. Later, after Daren was done bandaging his wounds. He greeted his father and step-mother. His father had always talked to him with a smile, while he helped his step-mother with breakfast. "Daren , my boy...We got a letter in the mail today. It was addressed to you." Daren's father said as he handed Daren the letter. Daren opened the letter and read it out loud "We have got your letter about your son, and we agree to give him a ticket to the Unova region, There will be a guardian to look over your son for the day. With best of luck, The Pokémon palace." Daren looked up with a stern look and looked at his father in the eyes "Dad why are you making me visit with the girl who lives in the palace?" Daren said disapointed when he got the news that he was spending a day with the girl down the road. "Its the best for you. Daren you still haven't made any new friends........So we think its best for you to stay at the palace....." Daren's mom said with a hint of concern. "After all your Abra is going with you" Daren's father said handing him the Greatball containing Abra and a couple empty Pokeballs. "Yeah you ARE right about my loyal pokemon Abra" Daren said calling the abra out and petting it. "The only cool thing about that old palace is that you can find a bunch of rare candy's and ghost pokemon so that's the only reason Im going" daren said in an insuring way. The next day Daren was on his way to Pokémon Palace! As he boarded the train to Unova "Good luck Daren" His mother said as she waved to goodbye to him. The next thing he knew he had arrived at the Bus Stop. As Daren Looked around at the few cherry trees growing next to the Bus stop that had a group of lilligant and Cherrim showing off there colorful moves to each other. Daren calmed down as the sweet smells of cherry blossoms swayed around him in a lovely dance of aromas. "Gee, Never thought I would get to smell the scent of Cherry blossoms before!" He said to him self quietly. "Maybe Ohmae would like this" He said taking out and holding the Great ball in his hand. "Maybe he would...Maybe he wouldn't" Daren said changing his mind for the moment and putting it back in the bag. A little bit later (After watching the lilligant and cherrim sing a lovely song) The bus pulled up at the stop and opened the doors ushering him inside. After settling down in his bus seat, Daren looked through the window and admired the scenery of forests and flower plains. "It truly is a beautiful place..." Daren said to himself. In a couple of hours he was going to spend 24 hours with a little girl....in a castle....how ironic if you ask the narrator ,any ways lets Get back TO THE ACTUAL STORY. Daren started to get sleepy but was quickly startled when he look up. There was a Pokemon and not just any pokemon but a hoppip. "The heck.....Why is there a hoppip on a bus.....DO HOPPIP EVEN LIVE HERE??!!" Daren said quietly, trying not to wake the girl asleep next to him. The Hoppip kept on using sleep powder on the people on the bus. It didn't seem to affect the bus driver though so they where ok. Daren thought about whether to fight the hoppip or just let it tire itself out. He though about ohmae and how he was most likely wasn't going to help. Then....he looked around one more time.......the girl that was sleeping next to him was gone.....in her place was a Eevee. Daren looked in awe, surprised. Everything was going on in random events. HEY, IM DOING MY BEST!!! WHAT DID YOU EXPECT FROM A 12 YEAR OLD??? Anyways......The Eevee looked a little angry at him. As if the entire reason that hoppip was on the bus, was his fault. He was confused, then mouthed "WHAT DID I DO"? The Eevee rolled her eyes (like a human "bean" Heheh) and used charm, followed by a bite. The Hoppip then realized he could not beat the charms of a Eevee then quickly fled from the bus by flying through the window. Daren thought quickly of what just happened and said "HA, WIMP" he chuckled at his rude remark about the Hoppip. The Evee (A little annoyed by him) gave a soft yip and then said "Quiet rude for a human boy to say about a young pokemon." The Evee said and stood on its hind legs and pulled a bag from off the ground. "Welp...anyways I'm here to take you to the palace...." She pulled out a paper and a id "Daren was it?" She said and handed him the id. wowwoowwowowoowwowowowow too bad so sad your NOT GETTTING AANY MORRR of THE STORY