Page 5 is done! If you can already tell, I've made some improvements to this page. Also, meet Dylan; Reagan's older brother and all-around nice guy. We will be delving deeper into his relationship with his sister and the people of Littleroot Town in the next installment.
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Pokémon ORAS: Page 5
by Astralpunk
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Wait a min!!!! @Alistair Jinn, Are these Machokes Female and Male, Male and Male or Female and Female? Cuz One is acting like a girl. P.S: Or maybe Male and Female. Also, I like this vid:
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Dec 30, 2016Typhlo.sion and Peridot!!! like this.
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Dec 18, 2016
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Nov 13, 2016PrincessPika~chan and Ariados twice like this.
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Nov 6, 2016
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Oct 31, 2016Dman365 and Excalibur Queen like this.
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Your art seems to have a serious theme and lots of crying. I have something!
"I think crying is really funny..." - Rebecca SugarOct 30, 2016Koalagame likes this. -
DAWW!!! If it was my brother, he'd probably start shouting "WHERE WERE YOU FOR ___ YEARS?!?"
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Awwww, I wish I had a brother...*starts to cry but wipes tears away* that's so cute.
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Oh shet it looks like he's the professor
Well, if he is/was, it would be cool. But it may just be his outfit.Oct 27, 2016 -
SO CUTE!~
I guess this page is one of my favorites ^^ and BTW, those machokes in the bottom panel though XDOct 27, 2016Honolulu the Vaporeon likes this. -
@Acel it's not too terrible of an inconvenience, haha ^^; sorry if I made it sound like one. I know that people who make comics for the first time generally tend to have some problems with paneling and stuff; it's all a learning process anyway (like all art is)
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@Shiny Lyni Yeah, I guess it can be a bit of a problem. I don't usually make comics like this, but I'll see what I can do with the next one. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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@Chiknluvr I mean, sometimes I can't tell if I'm supposed to read the panel to the right or the panel below next. Speech bubble placement is also a little difficult to follow but I think that's also mainly due to panel placement.
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Oct 26, 2016
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Your comic is very cute! I have a slight issue with your paneling as it can be a little difficult for me to figure out the order I'm supposed to read it in but otherwise I love it~
(Reagan's expressions are also <333)Oct 26, 2016PrincessPika~chan and Ariados twice like this. -
Oct 26, 2016Chikorita35 likes this.
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FIRST COMMENT! *high fives self because has no friends* Anywayz, I LOVE YOUR ARTWORK CAN YOU PLEASE DRAW PHOENIX THE FLAREON?!
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