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A Swampert's Omega Ruby Nuzlocke Tale: A Swampert's Omega Ruby Nuzlocke Tale: Part 2, A Strong Start

by Swampert "Beef Cake" Poke

Swampert "Beef Cake" Poke #summercamp15
"Honey, you should set the clock i got for you!"...................... Yeah whatever *Sets time then walks downstairs. "How do you like your new room? Good! Everything's put away neatly! They finished moving everything downstairs too. It really is so nice having Pokemon around to help us! Oh, but you should make su-" Im done hearing about your slavery and nonsense mom............ "AHHH COME QUICKLY! THE PETALBURG GYM LEADER IS ON T.V! IM FAN-GIRLING SO HARD RIGHT NOW!" The T.V starts sputtering words. Little does mom know, i don't exactly care. "You should go visit our new neighbors and introduce your self!" Yeah, AND TELL THEM THAT YOU MADE ME RIDE IN THE BACK OF A FREAKING TRUCK!!!!!!!!!! *goes to their house "WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING IN MY HOUSE!!" Hmmmmmm i was told to come here, seems legihat the same mom who made me ride in the back of the moving truck would not call in advance "IM GETTIN THE GUN IF YOU DON'T GET OUT OF HERE!" I guess i should leave. I then make my way to Professor Birch's Office. "What the heck do you want kid? Im busy!" well, i heard you give out Pokemon."IF IT MAKES YOU GET OUT OF THE WAY, THEN TAKES THIS YOU LITTLE $%&!" Wow OK didn't see you having a colorful vocabulary, lets see what Pokemon he gave me..................... "Mudkip!"...................... YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
  1. Sylve Kipper
    Sylve Kipper
    What's your guys name?
    Aug 1, 2015
  2. Sylve Kipper
    Sylve Kipper
    Jul 26, 2015
  3. Swampert "Beef Cake" Poke
    Swampert "Beef Cake" Poke
    thank you, i shall implement that criticism in chapter 4
    Jul 24, 2015
  4. AzureEdge
    I must say, I'm already enjoying your nuzlocke! I can't wait for the next chapter!~
    If you'd like some criticism, try to keep your story in paragraphs, and whenever someone else talks, it's best to indent whenever so possible. If the reader loses place, it's way easier to see where they left off!~
    Jul 24, 2015