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My World Just got Intresting !!! prt-1

by Sasha the Eevee Master

Sasha the Eevee Master Frost get sucked into the Pokémon world and meet the Blade Breaker the same scenario happened to then.
Hi I'm Frost and guess what theses next 10 chapter are my point of view enjoy.
Great just great. My head hurts I landed on something.... "Geo-Dude!" "BWAHHH! Geodude!!!" Wait.. No way... Thank you fait!!! I'm standing on a G-e-o-d-u-d-e!! SHIT!
I jumped of the Geodude a ran to Arceus know.

"AHH!" I just ran over a boy... "OOPS! SORRY! RUNNIG AWWWAY FROM A GEODUDE! BYE!" I sprinted the Geodude close behind the ground shook something roar. wait... "A Charizard! Cool!" My eyes sparkle an he sweat drops. "Sorry..." I whispered. The Charizard vanished in a red glow before smiling at me. creepy smile... I shuddered. "Hello names Kai Hiwatari. You nocked us all over!" He raised his voice. I begged. "SORRY FORGIVE ME! Wait who gave him to you I would like to know because I have no Pokémon. They looked at me big eyed. What did i Say. I shrugged it off.
Sorry its rubbish this is just an intro..
Ravyne Nevermore and Azur like this.
  1. Sasha the Eevee Master
    Sasha the Eevee Master
    MyLittlePwny777. Thanks trust me I am trying to update 4-7, but... I LOST MY FLIPPING BOOK! ARGGHH! I NEED TO REDO 10 CHAPTERS!!!!
    Nov 6, 2015
  2. Ravyne Nevermore
    Ravyne Nevermore
    It's not rubbish, it maybe short but I like it and also my stories are short as well. :)
    Mar 13, 2015
  3. Sasha the Eevee Master
    Sasha the Eevee Master
    I had writers block.....

    HASN'T LEFT ME!!!;_;;_;;_;;_;
    Jan 13, 2015
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  4. Azur
    It's not too bad, but you should try putting more punctuation. Maybe try writing shorter sentences? The story sounds good, other than that.
    Jan 12, 2015