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Kimon Region: Kimon Region Adventures: Chapter Six - The Mysterious, Ominous Cave

by Snqwy

Snqwy This is the storyline of my fangame narrated with my crappy writing skills.
Kimon Region Adventures: Chapter Six - The Mysterious, Ominous Cave

I heard rumors of the first gym revolving around the Rock type. I figured a smart idea would be to catch a Pokémon that would have a move super effective against it. Though, small problem. I had no idea what did.
I wandered back to the route I had seen those criminals at. There was a decently sized cave towards the end of the pathway. I figured I'd take a quick look inside. I walked up to the dark cave entrance. Ominous. Before I could step inside a small, cream colored Pokémon came rushing out. It had looked terrified. The small creature hugged my pant leg in fear of what was inside the cave. I had looked in but couldn't see behind the thousands of years of darkness reflecting off the walls. I had then looked down at the small creature. It appeared to be shedding tears. I retrieved my Pokédex from my backpack and held it up to the Pokémon's head. "Scanning...". "Sandshrew, the Mouse Pokémon. Sandshrew digs tunnels through the ground, creating burrows as it will go. Another Pokémon, Diglett, may sometimes assist Sandshrew in digging it's tunnels". "Sandshrew, huh?", I muttered, "What's gotten you so scared"? "Sh-shrew...", Sandshrew mumbled. "Would you like to come with me"? "ShReW!", it's eyes widened and it jumped up to hug me as if it were very relieved. I took a Pokéball from my backpack. and gently held it against it's head. I pressed the button in the middle. In a surge of bright light, Sandshrew disappeared in to the ball.
It shook once... twice... three times... Ding!
Sandshrew has been caught.
"I'll call you... Uchikina, or Uchini for short". "I bet you'll assist me in fighting the first gym leader! Speaking of which... he should be expecting me by now..."."I'll come back to this cave eventually. I want to find out what frightened Uchini so much". I felt as if a figure was watching me from the cave entrance. I shrugged it off and ran to the Masso Town gym.

To be Continued...
Central Kimon Concept Map:
https://www.scribblemaps.com/maps/view/kymon/jadSpSM_7M (kymon)
PokeStorm and Vacat1o like this.
  1. Snqwy
    It may not be noticeable at first but here's a little hint of my intentions relating to why Sandshrew was frightened. "Uchikina", the nickname given to Sandshrew is an actual Japanese word, and so is "Uchini" which has a whole different meaning in Uzbek. Use a translator such as Google Translate, [https://translate.google.com/#view=home&op=translate&sl=auto&tl=en], and select the Detect Language option and see what you get when you enter both words. It may be confusing or difficult to understand the significance of these words, or even why I chose to use them specifically, but in time it or they will come together. ;)
    Jan 29, 2019
    glennis75 likes this.
  2. PokeStorm
    Good start. I think you should have gone more into detail on why the Sandshrew was frightened, and I think realistically it wouldn't have just accepted capture that easily from some complete stranger. I'm not trying to put down your writing, but I always give honest opinions to people's work so that they can improve, including myself.
    Jan 28, 2019
    David Simlick likes this.
  3. Vacat1o
    Very nice.
    Jan 27, 2019
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