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I'm Finally Home

by The Blue Blur

The Blue Blur This Is For The #FlashClallenge. Even Though It's Not Pokemon Related, I Was In A Mother-y Mood So I Named The Characters After Them. This Has Nothing To Do With Mother Though. Enjoy!
"Well...I Wonder I'll Ever Find A Home..." Lucas Sighed Sadly.
Lucas Had Never Had A Family. He Was A 12 Year Old Boy From An Orphanage. He Hated The Place So He Escaped Just 2 Hours Ago. The Main Reason He Left Was For Freedom. They Never Let The Kids Outside.
As He Was Walking, Something Clonked Him On The Head.
"Woah...A MINI TREE!" He Shouted With Amazement At The Sight.
"I Have To Bring This With Me! It Will Be A Treasure To Mankind!" He Finished.
"HEY! GIVE THAT BACK!" Someone Shouted In The Distance.
"W-What Did I Do..." Lucas Said And Started To Back Away From The Booming Voice.
"Not You Stranger. Hey, Think You Could Come Over Here And Help Me?" The Distance Yelled Quieter Not To Scare The Boy Off.
"Ok Then...." Lucas Said And Started To Look For The Person.
"Oh, There You Are See That Hat Stuck There? Think You Could Help Me Get It Down?" The Boy Asked Him And Used His Baseball Bat To Point To The Hat.
Lucas Looked Up To See A Red And Blue Baseball Cap Stuck In A Tree.
"S-Sure...I Can...T-Try....I'm L-Lucas..." Lucas Trembled. He Was Very Shy And Didn't Talk To Others Much.
"Thanks! I'll Owe Ya One Later. I'm Ness!" The Boy Said With A Smile. "Hey How About You Get It With Your Stick?"
"Uhh...What's A Stick?" Lucas Asked.
"What You Have In Your Hands." Ness Said.
Lucas Thought That Was The Kindest Thing Anyone Has Done. All The Other Kids Back At The Orphanage Always Laughed At Anyone If They Made A Mistake.
"Oh...I Thought It Was A Mini Tree..." Lucas Said With Embarrassment.
Lucas Got The Inside Of His Baseball Cap With His Stick.
"Here You Go. Well...Bye Then." Lucas Said And Started To Walk Off.
"Dude Wait! You Have A Home...Cause I Don't So You Wanna Be Like Roomies?" Ness Asked
"Dude...YES!" Lucas Yelled And Came Running Back
"How About We Find Some Materials And Make A Little Camp." Ness Said And Went To Search For Materials.
"Wow...Finally Met Someone Who's Not A Meanie, Had A Adventure And Now Have A Brother. Mother...Father...I'm Finally Home..." Lucas Said And Wiped A Tear From His Eye.
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  1. The Blue Blur
    The Blue Blur
    Yeah...Hopefully I Didn't Hurt Your Feels Too Badly.
    Oct 10, 2014
  2. Jhan Garc
    Jhan Garc
    BAM! Right in the feels.
    Oct 10, 2014
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  3. The Blue Blur
    The Blue Blur
    Thanks. I Really Do Try. I Might Even Use This Story For Some ELA Assignment.
    Oct 9, 2014
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  4. AzureEdge
    Crap, I just broke a jar of feels.
    Nice story~!
    Oct 9, 2014
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