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Riolus: Enter Riolus

by ThePlayfulFox

ThePlayfulFox Now Pokemon belongs to Gamefreak (of course) thanks to Uniquenameosaurus for giving permission to EVERYONE who watched his video to use this idea. This is set about 300 years before Red/Blue/Yellow. Now let's get to the story. Anyway, what is his name? You can guess if you want.
A young boy got off the boat. He was new to this Region, Riolus. "All come to see the leader of our dear region, Alisotor!!!" A man shouted.
A man with a deep velvet robe and a golden crown with rubies in it stepped forward, out of the shadows. His pale skin reflected the sunlight, his brown beard was wiry. He was an all in all unpleasant looking man. He laughed before starting. "So I have a few new laws that I want you all to be aware of. And if anyone breaks them, my generals can do whatever they want to them. One, pokemon centers will all be closed down. All Doctors who work there will be imprisoned. Two, the selling of pokemon capture devices are now illegal. If you are caught either buying or selling them will land you in jail. Three, so that newer trainers can have a small glimmer of a chance, new trainers are allowed twenty pokeballs to start with then they can gain more when they kill pokemon. Oh, I forgot to mention, killing pokemon is now legal. Now go do what you do all day peasants." He dismissed them all.
The boy walked through the town. He just saw the king and he already hated him. To remove the king form the throne would be a dream come true. An elderly man with a scroll walked up to the boy. "Hmm, perfect shape, young enough, no pokemon. Say boy would you like to work for me?" The elderly man who looked like a scholar.
"Does it mean I get to have a pokemon?" He asked.
"Of course! Now would you?"
"Yes!" The boy said excitedly. This was his chance to take the throne and get rid of these horrible laws.
"Great! Now, now, what's your name?"
  1. ThePlayfulFox
    THX I'll give the King more personality later on in the story (and try to fix number 2)
    Apr 10, 2019
  2. Pine the Treecko
    Pine the Treecko
    Great, the only things I can find wrong it is
    1: The king is heartless.
    2: "Three, so that newer trainers can have a small glimmer of a chance, new trainers are allowed twenty pokeballs to start with then can gain more when they kill pokemon." in between "then" and "can" there should be "them" or some other pronouns,
    There are some missing commas here and there but in the end, nice story.
    Apr 10, 2019
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  3. ThePlayfulFox
    This is all I have so far
    the link to the original video is here. WARNING CURSE WORDS INCLUDING THE WORD F**K.
    Please help the original creator. He did say we could use it however we wanted, but I should give him credit where credit is due.
    Apr 9, 2019
  4. Firox
    looking nicely... read first paragraph... will read the rest later on
    (about to head out) - thanks for mentioning me
    loving it so far
    Can't wait to read the next parts, wondering what will hAllen next
    Apr 9, 2019
  5. LuckyLucy
    Apr 9, 2019
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  6. LuckyLucy
    Love it!
    Apr 9, 2019
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  7. ThePlayfulFox
    Thanks! I really suggest you watch the video that this scenario is based on. It will be important latter. (like the next chapter)
    Apr 9, 2019
  8. Vacat1o
    Very nice.
    Apr 9, 2019
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