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by Shiny Pyxis
MASSIVE Reboot of an old fic I put on 'Charms of a game we played. Resulted in a ton of drama that I was regretfully at the heart of. But thought I'd bring this back so everyone can facepalm at my fails. And also at how teenage Shiny writes, because it's pretty godawful.
As the events of the first day unfolded, Shiny found herself making some pretty rash decisions in order to keep herself alive. She is also rather melodramatic.
Shiny is still very melodramatic. Also, lotsa deaths.
Shiny does something right, and also makes a mistake. (As an aside, I'm getting incredibly sick and tired of the melodramatic tone of this whole thing. Past!Me really needs to stop.)
Surprisingly, I'm still really proud of this piece, probably because of its silly nature. Takes place during a rather long pause that occurred between Night 3 and Day 4.